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| Next Generation II A battle tournament exclusively for new heads. The 1st was won by Roger Glocks in 2005. Won by Frank Metts. |
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SuperMOD!!
Join Date: Jun 2001
Location: Igloo Projects
Posts: 3,568
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![]() Verses are due July 31st (Thursday) by midnight. 24 hour extensions can be granted by the opponent. Moderators can overrule battlers in regards to extensions. New battles will be posted August 3rd (Sunday). Voting is highly important to this tournament. Vote on as many battles as possible. Biting will result in a DQ from the tournament AND a ban from the site. Biting = stealing other battlers rhymes and pretending they're your own. Recycling will result in a DQ from your battle. Recycling = using rhymes you've previously used before. Feeding will result in 2 deducted votes per fed line. Feeding = playing off of your opponents verse. There are no line limits. You MUST match your opponents amount of lines if they posted first. However, you may post under what they posted, just not over. If you post first you cannot edit your verse after your opponent has dropped. If you post second you cannot edit your verse after a vote has been dropped. KOS |
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the future
Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: scotland
Posts: 441
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Sixteens enough...
Click me... damn you speak da hood talk tho G it's obvious to me this faggots a hip hop phony yo you whack there ain't no need for writtens i'll kill you, then you can chill in hell with Mr. Mittens fam, don't come to b-boys talkin' with that shit 'cos everyone thought you were too trash to battle on dat piff duke got through on a no show, you in the wrong fight come watch me smash m y date's pussy like it's prom night biggz posted the battle well chill im'a handle ya he can watch me pin up and mark date like a calendar i'm all four horsemen of the apocolypse been tried and tested you can call me dooms day when i end date's progression got a confession, kempo thinks your the whackest kid so in the sign up thread he said 'cool, thanks, you're in.' for real I get chicks without the use of sedative you better pray for rape like religious predators
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Join Date: Jul 2008
Posts: 18
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Hahaha....
The kid actually researched me... Alright... Got damn you fucking suck... Not the type I'd normally mess with/ Like 'should I even respond?' This whole battles a rhetorical question/ And it's probably the hardest battle I've ever been placed in too/ It's in-fucking-possible to think of concepts I would actually waste on you/ This whole match up is fucking sad... I mean damn, for heaven sakes duke/ I reside in the land of kings... So what exactly does that make you?/ I'm like Jordon in this tourney.... and besides you're ass/ But in that 1st round you were sorta like Kobe... Everyone was surprised you passed/ Next round you can count on me to win, count on 1st place yo/ But sadly next round only thing I can count on you for... is a hate vote/ Fuck 16 I'ma end this shit by bringing up ya fetishes/ "You are what you eat" And we all know "Meth'o'dic", so I aint even gon' mention it/ Like I said ock... Checkmate. Last edited by DateRapePaladin : 07-30-2008 at 08:58 AM. |
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Mr. Toilet, im the shit
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Baltimore, Md
Posts: 1,196
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Aight lets see here
Meth 1st... wasn't feeling kinda simple 2nd.... same as above so far I've seen better from you 3rd.... ehhh ok personal 4th.... man I don't know what happened duke I've def seen better from you 5th.... wording is fucked 6th.... this is your best line not to bad 7th.... ehh needed to spice it up a little 8th.... this was an aight was to close it I don't know what happened Meth I've seen better not sure if you underestimated or were just pressed for time ??? DRP 1st... aightish opener 2nd.... I like the swag in this line 3rd.... this was ok 4th.... ehhh okish 5th... seen these types of punchs b4 6th.... aight closer kinda stretched but ok Ok after reading Meths verse I thought DRP would take this simple but it was kinda close IMO I think if DRP would have went 16 it would have been cut and dry Meth seemed to rush his verse which I think hurt him DRP dropped less which hurt him .... but in the end I think DRP just had a more consistant verse... punches were more direct and harsh soo imm vote DRP
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SuperMOD!!
Join Date: Jun 2001
Location: Igloo Projects
Posts: 3,568
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methodic- This was an aight verse from you, I saw some decent bars and some good attempts. I also saw some weaker lines, but overall it was an aight verse. You tried out a few nameplays which was good, aswell as a few other things...but none of it was hard hitting. They were still alright punches, but you could up the impact level some.
DateRapePaladin- Your verse came up abit short on the length, and that's somethin that hurt you...why only that long? You had nice flow and structure but I didn't see any hard hits, it was all half assed...and it shows. I was really expecting more from you man, where was your head at this time? Overall this was still a close battle, and I feel that DRP could've came much harder but he didn't. The shortage on lines didn't hurt him so much as the lazyness did. methodic seemed more hungry this round, and for that he gets my vote KOS votes for methodic |
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u got next right?
Join Date: Jun 2008
Location: San Diego,CA.
Posts: 471
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to be truthfull...this battle wasn't to good for me...meth...ur verse wasnt that good at all...your first three lines made me just nod in a bad way. I have seen u come way harder than this son...cmon! U had the potential to run with something good here but i never saw a punch that was original enough to be like "its over!"...knawmean
DRP...ur verse was ok...u tried to get a lil flashy with it, but not many punches hit either...the Kobe line for me took it...he associated it well with hte situation and it made me laugh...the closer was also ok...pretty much enough to get my vote. honest vote...no hate. vote: DRP
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Join Date: Aug 2007
Location: Killa Cali Bitch!!!
Posts: 37
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Vote:methodic..
he basiclly had more original lines.. well two bars i can say.. The calender line basically sealed the deal.. both of your guys flow was coo.. other then a couple lines it was even.. |
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The Don Corleone
Join Date: May 2005
Location: England
Posts: 5,111
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I read this a few times and found it hard to work out a winner, so I broke down each verse into sections based on what I thought of the lines:
methodic Weak: damn you speak da hood talk tho G it's obvious to me this faggots a hip hop phony yo you whack there ain't no need for writtens i'll kill you, then you can chill in hell with Mr. Mittens fam, don't come to b-boys talkin' with that shit 'cos everyone thought you were too trash to battle on dat piff got a confession, kempo thinks your the whackest kid so in the sign up thread he said 'cool, thanks, you're in.' Sorta okish: for real I get chicks without the use of sedative you better pray for rape like religious predators Decent: duke got through on a no show, you in the wrong fight come watch me smash m y date's pussy like it's prom night biggz posted the battle well chill im'a handle ya he can watch me pin up and mark date like a calendar Good: i'm all four horsemen of the apocolypse been tried and tested you can call me dooms day when i end date's progression DateRapePaladin Weak: Got damn you fucking suck... Not the type I'd normally mess with/ Like 'should I even respond?' This whole battles a rhetorical question/ This whole match up is fucking sad... I mean damn, for heaven sakes duke/ I reside in the land of kings... So what exactly does that make you?/ Decent: And it's probably the hardest battle I've ever been placed in too/ It's in-fucking-possible to think of concepts I would actually waste on you/ Fuck 16 I'ma end this shit by bringing up ya fetishes/ "You are what you eat" And we all know "Meth'o'dic", so I aint even gon' mention it/ Good: I'm like Jordon in this tourney.... and besides you're ass/ But in that 1st round you were sorta like Kobe... Everyone was surprised you passed/ Next round you can count on me to win, count on 1st place yo/ But sadly next round only thing I can count on you for... is a hate vote/ Based on that I've got methodic with 1 good line, 2 decent lines and an okish line, and DateRape with 2 good lines and 2 decent lines. Even though DateRape dropped less I thought he just about took this. He shouldn't have dropped less though, cos methodic almost took it as he dropped a pretty decent verse, he just had too much filler 'n that hurt his verse as a whole. DateRape doesn't seem that new to battling really, his wording style makes me think that, especially on the 2 good lines I quoted. Yeah, I think he's new to the site as opposed to being new to battling. methodic is elevating a lot, I'm surprised at how much better he's got, so that's a big plus for him. DateRape got this. v/ DateRapePaladin
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