Frank Metts vs mutedweller76

[DA BIGGEST]

Originally Posted by KempoMRK

Verses are due July 24th (Thursday) by midnight.
24 hour extensions can be granted by the opponent.
Moderators can overrule battlers in regards to extensions.
New battles will be posted July 27th (Sunday).

Voting is highly important to this tournament.
Vote on as many battles as possible.

Biting will result in a DQ from the tournament AND a ban from the site.
Biting = stealing other battlers rhymes and pretending they're your own.

Recycling will result in a DQ from your battle.
Recycling = using rhymes you've previously used before.

Feeding will result in 2 deducted votes per fed line.
Feeding = playing off of your opponents verse.

There are no line limits.
You MUST match your opponents amount of lines if they posted first.
However, you may post under what they posted, just not over.

If you post first you cannot edit your verse after your opponent has dropped.
If you post second you cannot edit your verse after a vote has been dropped.

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[Frank Metts]

I hear nigga we going 16

[mutedweller76]

I'm not saying that you are not my equal rival,
but I'm the ground you stand on. Get ready for survival.
I'll grow trees through your spine, as if this shit is tribal.
This is your ER arrival. You look brain-dead and in need of revival.
It is vital that you understand my intention.
Pay attention, here, pay attention. This will be your education.
I can see that media had brought you to full degradation.
All the anticipation of ovation
got you screeching like a school girl while her first penetration.
See, I'm here and designed by creation.
To get rid of you. I'm the perfect filtration.
Measly aggravation, likes of me, you dare to mock.
Clickity-cluck, Clickity-cluck,
you sound like a hen ripped by a cock
stand away, you're about two upchuck
all the cum you ate, cause your ass is too nasty to fuck.
Wouldn't bet a buck,
but you are betting your future on your rhymes,
I'm the editor and will put you into obituaries of Sun Times.
Your rhymes, in your mind, splash like pigs in a ditch.
You thought you wrote great, but it's your asshole had a twitch.
I'll sing you a lullaby, rape you like your father... good night, bitch....

[mutedweller76]

I know I forgot checkin, so do as many bars as you want.

[Frank Metts]

Are u serious, some one call the paramedics...... ITS MURDAAAA

This tourny's mine, I'm not going to fumble the handoff
Come with a weak Mets diss and get dropped like Willie Randolph
The gloves are off, I feel sorry for weak rappers like you
Mutedweller wins?.... only if I were to feed or recycle and get DQ'ed
This is Magic I Spew, the'll find this victim in a police blotter
A fist to this faggots head will leave a scar bigger than Harry Potters
Punchs like a rock concert, c'mon dog did you really want beef?
one swing is like a stage dive, it'll take out a whole row.....of teeth
Got the voters saying good grief, Metts killed it, mute was dull
I'd tell you your really unskilled but I don't see no skill at all
And are u retarded? Checking in after you drop. This could get messy brah
But don't worry those haymers I landed earlier should help fix that dyslexia
The Next Gen champ is here, but as a kind jester imma hire this clown
Pay him minimum wage to dust of my thrown and polish my crown
You jobless so I know your down, you shouldn't of fucked with the best
I'm glad your a mute but someone should cut off your fingers so u can't text
I didn't even have to diss, I could of beat you with a flex
Its like that MTV game show Franks yelling NEXTTTTT

[mutedweller76]

That was tight... lol... I like that. Good verse man, sorry for the confusion. I didn't think it matter who posted first, since we can't feed anyway.

[KempoMRK]

Mute didn't really write a battle verse. It was more a song/track type diss verse. He didn't have any real direct punches at Frank. A couple were aimed at him, like the sun times line and the closer, but they didn't hit. His best line was the school girl one, that still needed to be directed better though. The verse overall just wasn't really a battle verse.

Frank's opener I didn't get the reference, but I can understand the line 'n it was ok. Feed/recycle/DQ'ed type lines have been done a lot. Scar was aight. Stage dive line was a good concept. The wording made it self glorification though. Coulda been dnoe better. Unskilled was sorta okish, ish. Haymers? I guess he meant haymakers. Not really feelin that. Minimum wage was cocky 'n simple. Fingers line was decent. Closer was sorta okish.

Frank's verse seemed quickly put together. He used his better battle experience, better wording and better understanding of battling to just, well, put together a better verse. Mute wrote a song verse with a couple of sorta punches in. Frank got it.

v/ Frank Metts

[C. Gaffle]

man why wasn't i told about this tourney

I'll edit a vote in later

[methodic]

Well, mute ain't really have any quotables in my opinion. like you didn't try to get at dude quite enough, flow was pretty chill, no real hard concepts no real slick hard hittin punches. I'd probably say the sun times was your best line or the school girls but both lacked a punch man.

now where as frank got some quoteables..

one swing is like a stage dive, it'll take out a whole row.....of teeth
Got the voters saying good grief, Metts killed it, mute was dull
I'd tell you your really unskilled but I don't see no skill at all
And are u retarded? Checking in after you drop. This could get messy brah
But don't worry those haymers I landed earlier should help fix that dyslexia
The Next Gen champ is here, but as a kind jester imma hire this clown
Pay him minimum wage to dust of my thrown and polish my crown
You jobless so I know your down, you shouldn't of fucked with the best
I'm glad your a mute but someone should cut off your fingers so u can't text

you came at dude from the off, throwing punches and landing them, some nice concepts some played ones too I don't think you gave this 100% though, after seeing dukes drop but over all i think you took it.

vote - frank

[DateRapePaladin]

Franky won...
It was one sided.

He actually had semi-dope concepts like the Row of Teeth and Cutting off fingers.

Mute didn't really have anything outstanding or out there.

Clearly the winner is Metts

[DA BIGGEST]

Frank wins 3-0


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