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Join Date: Feb 2007
Location: edmonton
Posts: 288
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this lil bitch got out of jail beef shit stayin flashy
talk to God and swallow my pride i pray this dude dont blast me i walk without a strap b i flip that shit for doe, see get fucked up to make a buck and feed those in my family they say they see the man in me, mama know i got big balls id lose my life to provide for her - yall know id throw it all she taught me strength and structure, she taught me to stand tall i flipped the script and im dodgin the bitch, that prays for my downfall
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Shit, it's like a jungle sometimes
It makes me wonder how I keep from going under When they hit me with the thunder and lightning its trifling, enlightening, and frightening some might think that it's even exciting |
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Join Date: Feb 2007
Location: edmonton
Posts: 288
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im tryin to expand.. i always pen the struggle
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Shit, it's like a jungle sometimes
It makes me wonder how I keep from going under When they hit me with the thunder and lightning its trifling, enlightening, and frightening some might think that it's even exciting |
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Join Date: Apr 2008
Posts: 1,077
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nice one
gangsta ass whitegirl ![]()
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Killaman
Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: Washington DC
Posts: 450
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N I gotta keep it goin, keep my head up, keep blood flowin
Through my veins, feel my pain, choppin dropin lines like rhymes of cocaine N you gotta keep it movin even if you got these bastards after you, blastin caps at you, do what you have to do, don't act a fool cause that could do you in faster than automatic gats'll shoot Cant nobody tell me bout the trouble, bubble, struggle had to single handedly muscle my way through concrete jungle While most niggas was playin with toys I had to watch my only homie get his brain destroyed so fuck all this damn beef the only people give two shits about you is family |
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Member
Join Date: Feb 2007
Location: edmonton
Posts: 288
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feelin it.
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Shit, it's like a jungle sometimes
It makes me wonder how I keep from going under When they hit me with the thunder and lightning its trifling, enlightening, and frightening some might think that it's even exciting |
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Join Date: Oct 2008
Posts: 9
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I liked it thouroughly, but the flow didn't hit me as hard as I felt it. I didn't like the line "she taught me strength and structure, she taught me to stand tall
i flipped the script and im dodgin the bitch, that prays for my downfall." The whole thing was about respect and it sounded like you called your own mom's a bitch. Did I miss something? |
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Member
Join Date: Feb 2007
Location: edmonton
Posts: 288
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naah not my mom, the guy tryna merk me aha
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Shit, it's like a jungle sometimes
It makes me wonder how I keep from going under When they hit me with the thunder and lightning its trifling, enlightening, and frightening some might think that it's even exciting |
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