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xxxJpAtTxxx · 11-18-2008, 07:42 PM

Pain haunts me everyday with no thoughts of leaving
lifes so deceiving, I ask myself why im grieving
thinking god put an angel here to wipe my tears and stop my fears
but only let me have her for 16 years
I give christ it all back for just a minute of time
like my raps missin a line, feels like im missin my mind
to think she won't be back got me thinking like wow
im missin ya know, when i see ya face glissin tha clouds
im screamin it loud, tellin my heart I need to stay calm
you missin my prom, man I'm missin my mom
In my heart I know all hope is gone
like this is a hopeless song, but it seems my hope is strong
Ima carry on ya memory like christ did god
only have one life and I feel like im robbed
but to be born out cha body will always be a blessin
christ teaching me a lesson, so moms i'll see ya heaven
save me a place beside the river of life
no quiver or strive or reason to cry
we'll walk the streets of god knowing it all ok
or so I say, this is what I hope and pray
so forget the fake stuff, enough with the hood rhymes
jesus finally got his bride so mom have a good time

I LOVE YOU, R.I.P Jeanette Mills

xxxJpAtTxxx · 11-18-2008, 07:54 PM

give me some feed ppl

Frank Metts · 11-19-2008, 12:16 PM

i dont like giving feed on something that seems soo personal yah dig i did read it and it was nice but im not going to break it down cause this felt more like something u wanted to get off your chest

xxxJpAtTxxx · 11-20-2008, 07:50 AM

yea i understand dawg

GrIme E · 11-20-2008, 08:00 AM

MurkinDem · 11-20-2008, 03:22 PM

R.I.P

Grime E have some respect for the dead if your gonna comment and say "wack" dont bother commenting. Useless faggot.

xxxJpAtTxxx · 11-21-2008, 12:23 AM

lol don't sweat him dawg...haters is my motivaters

MAD-VISION · 11-21-2008, 12:38 AM

r.i.p. Jeanette Mills

sorry bout the misunderstandings bro

$trIphE · 11-21-2008, 12:54 AM

r.i.p.

i might be an asshole...but i do give some respect out.

be strong homie

xxxJpAtTxxx · 11-21-2008, 09:36 AM

thanks stiphe and Mad...yall the heavyweights here and ur opinions matter

MAD-VISION · 11-21-2008, 04:25 PM

we appreciate the respect young (speaking for striphe but Im sure he with it)

I dont like the alias stunt you pulled or jumpin at me for no reasons but you got potential and we want you around...stay flowin

xxxJpAtTxxx · 11-21-2008, 04:30 PM

we a Team mad...even if you don't know it...nigga messin wit you is messin wit me

xxxJpAtTxxx · 11-21-2008, 04:31 PM

that was dumb but my bad

MAD-VISION · 11-21-2008, 04:31 PM

aiight soldier at ease...see you tommorrow im out

Paytience · 11-21-2008, 04:33 PM

Meh...nothing special; the piece I mean.
Hard Loss though. Sorry 'bout that.

11-18-2008, 07:42 PM	#1 (permalink)
xxxJpAtTxxx Member Join Date: Nov 2008 Posts: 123	have a good time...freestyle Pain haunts me everyday with no thoughts of leaving lifes so deceiving, I ask myself why im grieving thinking god put an angel here to wipe my tears and stop my fears but only let me have her for 16 years I give christ it all back for just a minute of time like my raps missin a line, feels like im missin my mind to think she won't be back got me thinking like wow im missin ya know, when i see ya face glissin tha clouds im screamin it loud, tellin my heart I need to stay calm you missin my prom, man I'm missin my mom In my heart I know all hope is gone like this is a hopeless song, but it seems my hope is strong Ima carry on ya memory like christ did god only have one life and I feel like im robbed but to be born out cha body will always be a blessin christ teaching me a lesson, so moms i'll see ya heaven save me a place beside the river of life no quiver or strive or reason to cry we'll walk the streets of god knowing it all ok or so I say, this is what I hope and pray so forget the fake stuff, enough with the hood rhymes jesus finally got his bride so mom have a good time I LOVE YOU, R.I.P Jeanette Mills

11-19-2008, 12:16 PM	#3 (permalink)
Frank Metts Mr. Toilet, im the shit Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Baltimore, Md Posts: 1,196	i dont like giving feed on something that seems soo personal yah dig i did read it and it was nice but im not going to break it down cause this felt more like something u wanted to get off your chest __________________ R.I.P Franklin Delano Metts 8/15/1934 - 12/18/2008 DOHpe. -Evidence Of Evolution-

11-21-2008, 12:54 AM	#9 (permalink)
$trIphE u got next right? Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: San Diego,CA. Posts: 471	r.i.p. i might be an asshole...but i do give some respect out. be strong homie __________________ -Evidence Of Evolution-

11-21-2008, 09:36 AM	#10 (permalink)
xxxJpAtTxxx Member Join Date: Nov 2008 Posts: 123	thanks stiphe and Mad...yall the heavyweights here and ur opinions matter __________________ The definition of being the best is being fake, because being best is an opinion not an option.... JpAtT= 7-2

11-21-2008, 04:30 PM	#12 (permalink)
xxxJpAtTxxx Member Join Date: Nov 2008 Posts: 123	we a Team mad...even if you don't know it...nigga messin wit you is messin wit me __________________ The definition of being the best is being fake, because being best is an opinion not an option.... JpAtT= 7-2

11-18-2008, 07:54 PM	#2 (permalink)
xxxJpAtTxxx Member Join Date: Nov 2008 Posts: 123	give me some feed ppl

11-20-2008, 07:50 AM	#4 (permalink)
xxxJpAtTxxx Member Join Date: Nov 2008 Posts: 123	yea i understand dawg

11-20-2008, 08:00 AM	#5 (permalink)
GrIme E Member Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Baltimore Posts: 22	wack

11-20-2008, 03:22 PM	#6 (permalink)
MurkinDem Bizanned Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Canada Posts: 137	R.I.P Grime E have some respect for the dead if your gonna comment and say "wack" dont bother commenting. Useless faggot.

11-21-2008, 12:23 AM	#7 (permalink)
xxxJpAtTxxx Member Join Date: Nov 2008 Posts: 123	lol don't sweat him dawg...haters is my motivaters

11-21-2008, 04:31 PM	#13 (permalink)
xxxJpAtTxxx Member Join Date: Nov 2008 Posts: 123	that was dumb but my bad __________________ The definition of being the best is being fake, because being best is an opinion not an option.... JpAtT= 7-2

11-21-2008, 04:33 PM	#15 (permalink)
Paytience Tomorrow's Demon Join Date: May 2002 Location: The Eye of the Massacre Posts: 560	Meh...nothing special; the piece I mean. Hard Loss though. Sorry 'bout that. __________________ Ravenous Angels Raganarok Rocked them, they were Lost, Locked up in Grief; Went through Two Armageddons, and still Brought Apocalypse Three.

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