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Nstromental · 02-02-2007, 06:00 PM

I am the man that grew from the seed that fell from the tree outside of a bar
I grew not unlike that tree that planted the seed in backseat of an 82 car
The tree took resposibility for me and the wife that came to be but he did not take it far
For when I was three he left the wife and me the seed and pretended he didn't know who we are

I hated that tree for abandoning me with a fire too painful to mention
So for 12 years I ruffled the leaves of that tree just for a little attention
At 15 the tree took me his old seed to live with his new seeds and gentian
For three years me the first seed made the life of the tree nothing but stress, hate, and tension

At 18 the tree made it up to me by being around when i was alone
Cause as I sat in the cell of a jail for distributing weed only the tree picked up the phone
And the tree did everything for me his seed to ensure the cell wouldn't be home
Now the tree and me the seed still have our beef but the branches between us have grown

Amuse.Meant · 02-03-2007, 05:38 AM

slept on. great nature between man-son, and nature of tree-seed. very well planned. "branches between us have grown" i like. sucks that the son had to go to jail in order to influence growth of a relationship. definitely enjoyed reading this. drop more. imma stop with the whole rippin cats in the cypher forum xD lets rock the poetry set next!!!

Nstromental · 12-09-2007, 04:50 PM

i must be like the most slept on poet here, c'mon i know my shit isn't that bad, thanks for the kind words muse

Big_Bang · 12-10-2007, 02:06 PM

Word UP? Really Nstromental?...U Droppin Shit Like Dat? Damn...Make Me Step My Skills Up Homie!! lol.

OK...Down To Business...I Liked This. It Took So Long Fa Tha Seed To Realize Tha Tree Was There Fa Him...Anger And Desertion...Clouded His Eyes...Isolation....Cleared It But Couldn't Take Away Tha Past. I LIked This...Good Shit

RyanB · 07-03-2008, 01:17 PM

Thats powerful stuff bro. Really spoke to where i'm at right now

wolf · 07-05-2008, 11:28 PM

cool story, i like the way you presented the main character (I). and that could be you or anyone else like RyanB said.

Revo1 · 08-21-2008, 05:50 PM

Nice play on the nature concept. Also nice to hear you're getting along with your father better.

Positivity...

02-02-2007, 06:00 PM	#1 (permalink)
Nstromental Soon to be Legendary Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Dallas, TX Posts: 170	Growth I am the man that grew from the seed that fell from the tree outside of a bar I grew not unlike that tree that planted the seed in backseat of an 82 car The tree took resposibility for me and the wife that came to be but he did not take it far For when I was three he left the wife and me the seed and pretended he didn't know who we are I hated that tree for abandoning me with a fire too painful to mention So for 12 years I ruffled the leaves of that tree just for a little attention At 15 the tree took me his old seed to live with his new seeds and gentian For three years me the first seed made the life of the tree nothing but stress, hate, and tension At 18 the tree made it up to me by being around when i was alone Cause as I sat in the cell of a jail for distributing weed only the tree picked up the phone And the tree did everything for me his seed to ensure the cell wouldn't be home Now the tree and me the seed still have our beef but the branches between us have grown

02-03-2007, 05:38 AM	#2 (permalink)
Amuse.Meant Haunting Cyphers Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: San Francisco, CA Posts: 511	slept on. great nature between man-son, and nature of tree-seed. very well planned. "branches between us have grown" i like. sucks that the son had to go to jail in order to influence growth of a relationship. definitely enjoyed reading this. drop more. imma stop with the whole rippin cats in the cypher forum xD lets rock the poetry set next!!! __________________ "While you're on cloud9 im goin on a journey far better than your high" -Muse kthxbai Yellow Rage, Def Poetry.

07-05-2008, 11:28 PM	#6 (permalink)
wolf still on the grind Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 386	cool story, i like the way you presented the main character (I). and that could be you or anyone else like RyanB said. __________________ what's crackin ....besides the carter III? --------------------------------------------- "when a man cusses, he doesn't know how to express himself appropiately"...

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12-09-2007, 04:50 PM	#3 (permalink)
Nstromental Soon to be Legendary Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Dallas, TX Posts: 170	i must be like the most slept on poet here, c'mon i know my shit isn't that bad, thanks for the kind words muse

12-10-2007, 02:06 PM	#4 (permalink)
Big_Bang Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 189	Word UP? Really Nstromental?...U Droppin Shit Like Dat? Damn...Make Me Step My Skills Up Homie!! lol. OK...Down To Business...I Liked This. It Took So Long Fa Tha Seed To Realize Tha Tree Was There Fa Him...Anger And Desertion...Clouded His Eyes...Isolation....Cleared It But Couldn't Take Away Tha Past. I LIked This...Good Shit

07-03-2008, 01:17 PM	#5 (permalink)
RyanB Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Posts: 3	Thats powerful stuff bro. Really spoke to where i'm at right now

08-21-2008, 05:50 PM	#7 (permalink)
Revo1 Revolution One Love! Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Michigan, USA Posts: 11	Nice play on the nature concept. Also nice to hear you're getting along with your father better. Positivity...