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Old 07-06-2008, 12:01 AM   #1 (permalink)
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i'm making myself write at least a poem a day and today's random topic is ....

Halo

Laying, waiting, outside of Earth,
outside of Time, outside the Universe
in a different zone of twilight
with the mightiest bright light
I've ever seen
invisible golden rings
viewing angelic clips without the evil magazines
our lives are viewed on a cloud screen
showing every hidden good scene
and every little bad thing
considered sinning,
and well,....
those people come to grips of a glimpse of hell
and that ring disappear into horns and a tail
no excuse though we were born to fail
Goku, GT, stand up to a super Cell
go super saiyan to the Devil himself
don't slouch, pull yo Trunks up & bounce
use every ounce of energy
to slice up your enemy
don't let yo heart get Kold
don't quarantine yo soul
have the Dragon Balls to go after your goals
Pray!....
then we can celebrate on yo Halo-day
then when yo name's pronounced from the book of life
that ring, shines bright, now you can live twice,
though we're predetermined to die
we're predetermined to live; with a message to take,
with a sermon to give
or your agnostic flesh will bake
Hot Boys, Corn Flakes, with no more debates
For Philosophy sakes, don't make all kinds of mistakes
400 Degreez, no mo apologies,
jus.. One republic please,
Quarantine those evil needs
like Mace did Palpatine
Jedi the Council, King
you know who the prince will be
Jesus walks..... and God speaks,
count the goats then count the sheep,
b4 the top of the iceberg leaks
from hell's heat,
at least its a shot,
turning into red hots like Mars
or be Saturn and drive demons away far
but i'ma end this piece wit a dish of caviar.

(disciples were fishers of men, that's why i used caviar at the end)
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Old 07-13-2008, 01:04 AM   #2 (permalink)
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