Ms. Sixteen

[Sha-Sha]

She’s been
Raped and abused
Scared and bruised
All at the hands of a man….who claims he loves her
She’s not your typical teenage girl
Her name is Ms. Sixteen
So young, so sweet
So innocent and naive
She can’t see that the life she’s living is
Destined to end in her demise
Cause she’d rather open her thighs
Than to get out on her grind and seek knowledge as her prize.
She’d rather be pimped by her so-called love
Bringing in thousands of dollars at a time
As well as black eyes and busted lips
Cause she refused to take part in his nasty little tricks
Tricks that had her questioning her worth
Wondering was this the reason of her birth
To live as someone else's personal love slave
Giving into any and everything thrown her way
See Ms. Sixteen had established herself as a “pro” in the game
And no one else could take her place
As long as she licked her lips and kept a slim waist
And it stayed that way, until Ms. Sixteen met her match
Mr. HIV, see he came in and shared his love
Now she’s slowly dying of an epidemic, she wasn’t aware of
Because all her lovers wore a glove
That’s all the protection she thought she needed
In her fast life of tricking, loving, and leaving
See….
She’s been
Raped and abused
Scared and bruised
All at the hands of a man….who claims he loves her
She’s not your typical teenage girl
Her name is MS. SIXTEEN
And today she died of an epidemic called HIV.

[jay.robinson15]

That's really good man, it flowed well, and it sounds like it's comin straight from the heart

[ovadosebeats]

wow... powerful!

[speakeasy602]

I don't know... Seemed a little cliche' at points, but I thought overall, it was pretty dope.

[InfiniteAnthems]

dope...

[Sha-Sha]

2 All of u thanks 4 the feedback

[theory]

Overall I enjoyed the story-telling and nice rhyme schema. My favorite lines were this:

Cause she’d rather open her thighs
Than to get out on her grind and seek knowledge as her prize.

flowed really well. nice piece.

-theory