My Poem (To a girl...named...Asia)

[K-Town Kid]

My heart...torn to pieces...
My love for her, almost needless,
But I look at her picture...
And I'm like, "Damn though, I need this..."
I might need another witness to see this...
To see me when i finally drown and sink beneath this...
And I feel as though I should leave,
Yet I'm still emersed in her love...
Because even as I'm underneath, I sense she is above...
She is my dove....my chick, my world...
She is my love...oh shit...this girl...
Have my head spinnin round like a Tornado...
Plus the fact the girl got ass like a Tomato...
Thick..juicy, and yes, she stay sweet...
From what she layers on top,
Til what she is underneath...
And what she is, pure beauty, fine-ness at its finest...
She got my sick thinkin bout her like she cloggin up my synes...
But damn...if I loved this chick anymore it might be a sin...
Cause I love God more than her, but barely, thats on a whim...
The fact that he and her could even be compared...
Would make her proud, yet at the same time scared...
She like it when I make her laugh, she say that I'm funny...
And I love makin her laugh too, I'm her thug bunny...
No homo on the bunny part, you know its all good...
I wish she was wit me right now, I'm wishin she could...
But she can't, and she won't, cause her mom, well she don't..
Approve of us together, like she got a rope...
Round her neck, like a leash
and its her, I'll unleash...
To be loose, on the streets...
As long as, she wit me...
If she aint, I'm depressed...
A feeling, in my chest...
Like I'm broke, not a joke,
Like I'm dying, at best...
And then she come back...
I'm happy and shit...
I can't stop cheesin...
Man I'm lovin dis chick...
She like my own personal, fuckin McDees...
/Burgerking/Wendies, shit / Chuckie Cheese...
She everything I want in a woman and more...
The way she love me up top, to back down on the floor...
And she grindin and windin, I'm laughin and dancin...
THen the look in our eyes, we jus start romanicin...
I rub on her thighs, and I look in her eyes...
Theres this shimmering glow, it make me wanna cry...
But with joy, I'm not sad, The best girl I've had...
If anything shawty, I'd have to be glad...
Cause your looks will amaze...
Niggas eyes will have glazed...
I'll get lost in your maze...
And not want to be saved...
I'm trapped in you girl, you know that you my lady...
I'm only out when you want me...but then that would be crazy...
Cause we fight always about who loves who most....
And I finally give up, you put my ass on roast...
'I love you times infinity, infinity to the power...
I love you more than that,' And this goes on for hours...
But I'm happy it does, cause the shit is so cute...
But through all of this shit, girl you know I love you...
Through the ups and the downs, the lefts, and the rights...
You still the one who I want to be cuddled wit at night...
Thru the times of good, and the times of the bad...
Be happy thru all, cause you're the best I've ever had...

[K-Town Kid]

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