Rock Bottom

[Sha-Sha]

I've lingered in this dreary path for far too long
Given you to much time to prove me wrong

You said you'd be there through all my ups and downs
And you were until she started coming back around

Filling your mind with bogus lies of how I've cheated
And I how everytime you called and I didn't answer I was just with an ex

But I question how you could question your woman over your ex
And all this DRAMA has placed me here in a place I've never wanted to be

ROCK BOTTOM

Here I walk the streets of this forsaken land
Cause you can't stop looking in the past

And as I walk these streets the tears of yesterday's memories
Slowly trickle down my cheeks and fall on my full lips

Just to fall in your lap because you were the last one I was to kiss
See ROCK BOTTOM is no place for a woman who's in love

And unfortunely I've landed here cause I love a man
Whose mind is caught up in his ex's plots and schemes

While I sit here alone have daymares and nightdreams
Of when my true love will come back to me.

[Noir]

I always love to read a good piece about love or relationships. its something everyone can relate to. something everyone has been through. and not matter how similar the situation may be, they all have there small but very significant differences. good post. I liked the overall Idea. the spacing did affect the flow alittle bit, but didn't take away from the feel of the poem. I see you often write about love or ramance. they are good inspiration for poetry. continue dropping keep elevating

[Sha-Sha]

Thanks Noir, yea I write alot about love and relationships because like you said thats the one thing many ppl have issues with so what better topic.