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Join Date: May 2008
Location: Phoenix, AZ
Posts: 13
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This is something I wrote back in the day, and it's not usually my writing style, but I really like it...
VERBAL WAR!! I'll control the underground Dig graves as your grieving in sadness releasing the madness I turn off your breathing aperatus so fast your lungs decrease in mass and start depleating to ashes your heart stops beating and blackens til you start seeing the flashes of past life, demons with matches - to burn up your life goals and fate- as you hold the weight of the world it gets hurled through the black holes of space You know I'm great My flow creates an undertoe It makes you wonder "bro" if you'll be six feet under where the lumber grows Your time is comin slow, but maybe not for days your clogged up vains, making the noise of helicopter blades You can yell for doctor aids to heal you with resources but your final retort is, to lay here with these corpses. I'm not that dark, I wrote it a long time ago... It's a little demented for my recent taste.
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Join Date: Apr 2008
Posts: 66
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not bad homie.
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