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Old 05-21-2008, 09:35 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Exclamation Verbal War

This is something I wrote back in the day, and it's not usually my writing style, but I really like it...

VERBAL WAR!!

I'll control the underground
Dig graves as your grieving in sadness
releasing the madness
I turn off your breathing aperatus so fast
your lungs decrease in mass and start depleating to ashes
your heart stops beating and blackens
til you start seeing the flashes
of past life, demons with matches - to burn up your life goals and fate-
as you hold the weight of the world
it gets hurled through the black holes of space
You know I'm great
My flow creates an undertoe
It makes you wonder "bro"
if you'll be six feet under where the lumber grows
Your time is comin slow, but maybe not for days
your clogged up vains, making the noise of helicopter blades
You can yell for doctor aids
to heal you with resources
but your final retort is, to lay here with these corpses.

I'm not that dark, I wrote it a long time ago... It's a little demented for my recent taste.
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Old 06-03-2008, 09:38 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Default NICE POEM

COOL POEM YOU SHOULD GO PRO
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Old 09-17-2008, 06:50 AM   #3 (permalink)
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poeticly written in bboy fashion. id hate to get into a battle with u. itd be quite troublesome.
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Old 10-21-2008, 07:51 AM   #4 (permalink)
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sweet poem my dude
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Old 10-21-2008, 03:39 PM   #5 (permalink)
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not bad homie.
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